"Judging by these excerpts, this book is a disaster. Many of the
claimed facts are bogus, the logic is shoddy, some of the people
you claim to have used as important sources have already blasted
you for inaccuracy, and at the end of the day you will have earned
nothing but ridicule for it.
"I'm going to be charitable and assume that this mess is the
result of honest error (rather than, as some are now charging, a
paid hatchet job). Accordingly, I suggest some corrections here. Be
aware that I will publish this critique if I am not swiftly
convinced that those corrections will be incorporated..."